Over the last century, an increasing number of animals have become endangered or extinct. What do you think the causes are? What solution can you suggest?

Throughout recent decades, animals have posed a massive and dangerous threat.
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serious risk is that these creatures are gradually wiped out from the natural scenes.
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environmental concern, effective
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can be adopted to remedy the situation. These two reasons can be considered the most important causes leading to
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environmental crisis.
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, it has been recently observed that the amount of excessive poaching has increased and
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behaivour
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will ultimately contribute to the horrifying situation for other
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planet’s residents. Sadly, based on the viral news that we face every day in the media, some careless people without any pang of conscience, shoot at animals in their natural habitats and kill them just for their selfish purposes
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as entertainment or commercial reasons.
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, in our current world, the urban sprawl and
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the modern and industrialized regions are significantly raising and a huge number of natural places that they surround not only giant cities and metropolitans
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small towns are disappearing
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widespread sprawling. There are,
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, some workable solutions and
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to alleviate
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problematic and challenging difficulty that the earth’s ecosystem has
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undergone.Excessive hunting can be curbed by some laws that government has to pass to take the rein of illegal hunters.
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, they can set some strict rules that allow the official authorities
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as police officers to put these villains in
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for a considerable amount of their lives, perhaps they would stop doing
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cruel and bloody activity.
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politicians must make some constructive
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to stop the growth of industrial and residential sites around the cities and mitigate
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problem by imposing heavy fines on offenders and allocating a huge amount of money to conserving natural habitats for their real inhabitants.
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, animals are in extreme jeopardy these days and they will become eradicated in (the) near future if
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effective decisions have not been taken by power sources immediately all around the world. Illegal hunting and the massive growth of modern areas are the most blamable reasons for
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crisis. International and local authorities must pass useful laws to prevent
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disaster. If appropriate
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have been made, these innocent citizens of the earth
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can live in better situations and
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our planet’s ecosystem can survive.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • endangered species
  • extinct
  • habitat destruction
  • urban development
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • chemical runoff
  • plastic waste
  • air pollution
  • poaching
  • illegal wildlife trade
  • climate change
  • global warming
  • species adaptation
  • conservation laws
  • protected areas
  • sustainable practices
  • wildlife conservation
  • ecosystem restoration
  • reintroduction programs
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