The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The pie chart represents the work anthropology students engage in, after graduating from one university
whereas
, the table depicts the data of incrementation in paychecks after 5 years of interval.
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Overall
from the given data, it can be assumed that full-time work holds more than 50 %, Linking Words
on the other hand
, graduates avoid engaging themselves in part-time work with post-grade study as it has the slightest fraction at 5%.
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Furthermore
, part-time workers and unemployed graduates are at 15% and 12% respectively. Linking Words
In addition
to that, full-time postgrad study and not known both are at 8 %. Everyone is very good.
The government sector pays a salary of $ 1,00,000+ to more than 50 % of anthropology graduates Linking Words
whereas
, private companies are only at 30%. Linking Words
Moreover
, 35% of the workforce gets a paycheck of 50,000 to 74,999 dollars in private companies. Freelance consultants share 40% each for the Linking Words
last
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