The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The maps
displays
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the development which is been made of a school from the year 1985 to
present
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the present
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time.
Overall
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, new amenities
has
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been constructed over
the
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apply
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time for the welfare of students,
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however
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the entrance and exit gateway and Office haven't been restructured since 1985. The massive difference which can be seen is on the playground fields which has been dwindled
into
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half compared from the 1985 year to the present year, now new facilities are built over the field
such
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as Pool and Fitness centre. Over the period
classrooms
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size has seen a gradual enlargement to probably accompany more learners. In 1985, there used
be
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a library which is now reconstructed into
Learning
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a Learning
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resources centre and within there is a computer room as well. The roads are demolished which used to go to the playing fields, followed by an additional car parking has been built in the present time.
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