The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The maps
displays
the development which is been made of a school from the year 1985 to Change the verb form
display
present
time. Correct article usage
the present
Overall
, new amenities has
been constructed over Change the verb form
have
the
time for the welfare of students, Correct article usage
apply
however
the entrance and exit gateway and Office haven't been restructured since 1985.
The massive difference which can be seen is on the playground fields which has been dwindled Add a comma
,however
into
half compared from the 1985 year to the present year, now new facilities are built over the field Change preposition
to
such
as Pool and Fitness centre. Over the period classrooms
size has seen a gradual enlargement to probably accompany more learners.
In 1985, there used Change the noun form
classroom
be
a library which is now reconstructed into Add the particle
to be
Learning
resources centre and within there is a computer room as well. The roads are demolished which used to go to the playing fields, followed by an additional car parking has been built in the present time.Correct article usage
a Learning
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