The process of producing edible oils and fats, and margarine
The diagram illustrates the process of consuming margarine, audible oils and fats. There are several stages in the process which explain how the raw
product
is separated from the contaminant and how it is transmitted to the market.
First of all, raw materials such
as sunflowers, beans, coconuts, and peanuts are collected. Then
, those items are transported using water vessels. Next,
it is picked up in the silo where the place to save that product
.
After that, the raw Add aย missing verb
is.
product
is crushed and milled. After some time, the material is pressed to extract the oil from other materials. Then
, the material is filtered to regain. Next,
the oil is steamed. The manufacturers are decided to become three categories. After that, the product
of oils and fats that can consume is packed into a bottle and box. Finally
, the product
is transported to the supermarkets or shops to be sold.
In conclusion, it is clear that
there are steps how to produce the raw material and delivery it to the stores where ready to purchase by the customer.Submitted by gabriellasada24 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite