Some people think that public health is the responsibility of the government, while others believe that individuals should be responsible for their own health. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some believe that public make regulations regarding
health
is the Use synonyms
responsibility
of the authorities, Use synonyms
whereas
others feel that Linking Words
people
should be responsible for their own Use synonyms
health
. In my opinion, the government have Use synonyms
main
Add an article
the main
responsibility
for their Use synonyms
Use synonyms
citizens
Change to a genitive case
citizen's
citizens'
health
rather than Use synonyms
Use synonyms
citizens
.
On the one hand, some think Correct article usage
the citizens
individuals
should take Use synonyms
responsibility
for their Use synonyms
health
rather than the Use synonyms
Use synonyms
governments
. They think if Fix the agreement mistake
government
the
Correct article usage
apply
individuals
become responsible Use synonyms
about
their Change preposition
for
health
Use synonyms
this
can encourage them to adopt healthy Linking Words
lifestyle
. To illustrate, they will eat healthy food and Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
playing
sports. Wrong verb form
play
As a result
, Linking Words
healthy
lifestyle can prevent Add an article
a healthy
people
to develop serious diseases namely, cancer, overweight, Use synonyms
heart
attack.
Correct word choice
and heart
On the other hand
, I would like to agree with those who believe Linking Words
the
Correct your spelling
that
governments
should become responsible Use synonyms
about
their Change preposition
for
citizens
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, Linking Words
people
have paid taxes to Use synonyms
governments
. Use synonyms
Consequently
, the Linking Words
governments
should use these funds to provide Use synonyms
better
healthcare system namely, hospitals, Correct article usage
a better
clinics
with affordable prices Correct word choice
and clinics
as well as
quality services for Linking Words
individuals
. Use synonyms
For example
, Linking Words
the
Saudi Arabia Correct article usage
apply
offer
free healthcare for all Change the verb form
offers
citizens
with Use synonyms
high quality
medical services. Add a hyphen
high-quality
Secondly
, the Linking Words
governments
have Use synonyms
power
to introduce laws in orderChange the article
the power
Fix the infinitive
to
force
restaurants to make Replace the word
forcing
Use synonyms
health
food. Replace the word
healthy
Therefore
, Linking Words
Linking Words
this
regulations can enhance Correct determiner usage
these
Use synonyms
people
Change noun form
people's
overall
Linking Words
health
and prevent them to develop serious diseases namely, obesity, Use synonyms
cancer
, because Correct word choice
and cancer
the
most Correct article usage
apply
of
diseases result Change preposition
apply
of
unhealthy food.
Change preposition
from
To sum up
, In my perspective, Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
overall
Linking Words
health
is the Use synonyms
responsibility
of the government rather than Use synonyms
individuals
, because Use synonyms
people
already have paid taxes to the Use synonyms
governments
, and the Use synonyms
governments
have powerful tools to promote healthy Use synonyms
lifestyle
.Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
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