Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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suggested that protecting some specific
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and
plants
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is the most important of  environmental preservation. Some people and I hold
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opinion that all aspects of the
environment
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play vital roles and they are interconnected as if any damage is caused to one of them, it can threaten human life. Some people argue that protecting creatures and vegetation is a must and that the death of a specific group of them is the biggest problem for the
environment
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. The existence of all species of
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and
animals
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is essential for ecosystem and natural cycling.
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, Cheetah is an endangered animal which is going through Extinction
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massive hunting and people's awareness.
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kind of animal is the fastest of cats that hunt other
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and without them some other
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grow overwhelmingly and it has harmful effects on nature.
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,
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are helpful for the
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as deforestation can cause constant storms with big damage.
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the damage to kinds of
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and
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is harmful , there are other problems which are important  for the
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as air pollution and a decrease in resources. Air pollution leads to global warming which is a serious threat to the earth and creatures.
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, an increase in greenhouse emissions by using massive cars and other vehicles pollutes weather makes temperatures rise and
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polar ice to melt.
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, fossil fuel is
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and they are irreverent.
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,
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protecting all species of
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and
plants
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an integral part of environmental conservation, other approaches like preventing air pollution and overuse of resources are essential.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the introduction clearly presents the main points and the conclusion summarizes the key arguments.
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Support the main points with relevant and specific examples to strengthen the argument.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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