some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success,others argue that depends on different factors.discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some
people
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state that the source of individual
happiness
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only
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depend
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their wealth level.
However
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, a growing number of
people
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hold a different attitude toward
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topic
due to
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better education.
While
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I believe that
happiness
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should be made up of many essential things not only
money
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. On the one hand,many
people
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support that whatever who you are,you should make an effort to earn more
money
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in order to obtain a better
life
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.There is no doubt that
money
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allows us to purchase various products we want,
such
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as houses,cars, clothes
as well as
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living necessities.
Furthermore
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, we can have easy access to places where we want to go.Exposing these resources to finances can create a happy experience and build a better connection with
this
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world. On the other hand,more and more
people
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pay more attention to expanding their horizons to pursue non-material or low-material
life
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experiences.Because the definition of
happiness
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is a widespread concept.
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,some
people
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prefer to live an extremely simple
life
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which can give them a sense of
happiness
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as well.
People
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who are willing to understand
this
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world through a wealth of knowledge and opening value view
instead
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of simply
money
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are more likely to feel
happiness
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. In conclusion,
although
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money
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can buy many important items in our
life
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.But I can pursue better
life
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without considering
money
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's function.
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