The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020.
The pie chart below shows the statistics of imported
vegetables
into Qatari from 1980 to 2020. It is evident that spinach sees a reduced
Replace the word
reduction
of
imports from 2000 to 2020 Change preposition
in
while
all the other vegetables
sees an increase or same
amount of imports after the year 1980.
Correct article usage
the same
To begin
, garlic and broccoli witnessed a steady import to the country while
spinach is declining in imports. Peas on the other hand
have the same amount imported into the country from 1980 to 2000 and sees
an increase of 20 tonnes in 2020.
Correct subject-verb agreement
see
While
some vegetables
sees an increase during
2000 to 2020, ginger Change preposition
from
have
imported 50 tonnes lesser in 2020 despite it being imported 60 tonnes more from 1980 to 2000. Change the verb form
has
Therefore
, from the pie chart
we can assume that garlic is the most demanded Add a comma
,chart
vegetables
Fix the agreement mistake
vegetable
while
peas have always been the least demanded vegetables
Fix the agreement mistake
vegetable
since
1980 to 2020.Change preposition
from
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Vocabulary: Replace the words vegetables with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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