The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
The graph illustrates the number of
hours
per day that Chinese
, American, Turkish
, and Brazilian
visitors
spent time
doing activities during on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
Overall
, the amount of time
that visitors
in four countries do on holiday reading books
was the highest. Turkish
and Brazilian
visitors
like spending their time
on activities at the beach
. The amount of time
that tourists
visit places was least
.
All the Correct article usage
the least
Chinese
and American tourists
preferred spending their time
reading books
. Chinese
travelers spent 8 hours
reading books
on vacation and Americans spent 5 hours
. Chinese
tourists
spent time
doing activities at the beach
was 3 hours
, whereas
Americans spent 4 hours
each day. Both groups spent least
amount of Change the article
the least
time
visiting places on vacation in Green.
Contrary to Chinese
and American visitors
, Turkish
and Brazilian
travelers
spent more Change the spelling
travellers
time
at the beach
. Turkish
tourists
spent 5 hours
at the beach
on a daily basic
and Replace the word
basis
Brazilian
tourists
spent 6 hours
at the beach
. Turkish
and Brazilian
tourists
spent the same time
reading books
for 4 hours
each day on vacation. Finally
, Turkish
and Brazilian
visitors
spent least
Change the article
the least
time
visiting places for 3 hours
and 2 hours
respectively.Submitted by ieltsamiedu on
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