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More and more plastic waste is polluting the world’s city, countryside and ocean. What problems will it cause? What measures should be taken to solve these problems?

The incremental
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 waste provokes various pollutions to the environment nowadays, including land and ocean, which causes various hazards,
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 as chronic diseases in humans,
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 it, endangers the habitats of other species. I believe there are some countermeasures for governments and individuals to address
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 problems, including finding alternative materials and stopping using disposable containers. First of all, there are many drawbacks derived from the pollution caused by a great number of
plastic
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 waste, including the toxic gas released into the air
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 lead to respiratory diseases in local residents. On top of that, the
plastic
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products
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 dumped into the ocean could cause the death of turtles and fish for mistaking it as food.
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, many dead fishes are found in their stomach full of
plastic
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 bags. There are some methods to solve
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 problems, since both individuals and authorities have obligations to tackle the problems, first of all, it is essential for governments and commercial institutions to find sustainable materials that could replace
plastic
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products
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.
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, a company in the Netherlands make use of recycled glass bottles to make clothes and handbags which be made with
plastic
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 components.
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, individuals could put an effort into it by reducing the consumption of over-packaged
products
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 and conducting shopping with their own bags. To summarise, high demand for
plastic
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products
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 could lead to serious hazards to the world, causing pollution in the air and the ocean. In my perspective, there are some countermeasures to stop the deterioration of
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 trends, including finding new substances to replace
plastic
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products
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, and consumers should stop buying
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 packed in many layers to reduce unnecessary waste.

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