Children should be given free laptops when they start high school. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some believe that high schoolers should receive laptops without being charged or filing any requirements. I partly agree with

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it has several drawbacks and benefits for society. First of all, it could be a waste of money for the government.

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, not all secondary

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have the opportunity to provide laptops to every pupil they have more essential issues

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as desks, chairs and boards, and even some

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in villages do not have electricity.

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, in the modern ,world everyone can afford to buy a laptop and they need it for studying purposes.

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, most educational places provided as library computers are open for public use.

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, some

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do not allow to use of any gadgets at school because teachers think it distracts them from studying.

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, when I was studying at school, everyone played online games and tutors did not want to teach us because of

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, some believe that children should start using a laptop in secondary

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now every calculation or action performed by computers.

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, during the pandemic ,time pupils cannot online classes

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a lack of it.

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after ,lessons children

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can have the opportunity to watch YouTube and get more understanding of

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subject.

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, I always watch YouTube lessons by passing exams at my University because there might be any situation like when I was absent.

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, in my ,opinion technologies are inevitable and we should adopt them and the government should start giving them to

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