You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience, you have

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to express my interest in the role of social

event

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organiser for a month's training programme in the UK. As am

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working as an

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coordinator in my free time for a creative events company, I believe that I would be best suitable for

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role because I have organised more than 10 events in the

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year. First of all, it would be really helpful if you do not mind furnishing me few details regarding the

event

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. May I know the kind of

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you are expecting to host at the programme, whether it should be indoor or outdoor

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Since am part of the training you have already shared the itinerary but may I know the cost limit for

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event

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to be planned

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, as am already working for a

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management firm so I believe that from my own ,experience I could able help you with planning an extraordinary

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at a minimal cost.

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, I have a branch of my company operating in the UK, So I can even get us some staff discounts for hosting an

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and

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complimentary entry tickets for any one tourist place in the locality. It would be great if I was provided with

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opportunity expecting to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely David

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

223 words

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