You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience, you have

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to express my interest in the role of social

event

organiser for a month's training programme in the UK. As am

also

working as an

event

coordinator in my free time for a creative events company, I believe that I would be best suitable for

this

role because I have organised more than 10 events in the

last

year. First of all, it would be really helpful if you do not mind furnishing me few details regarding the

event

. May I know the kind of

event

you are expecting to host at the programme, whether it should be indoor or outdoor

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Since am part of the training you have already shared the itinerary but may I know the cost limit for

this

event

to be planned

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Nevertheless

, as am already working for a

event

management firm so I believe that from my own ,experience I could able help you with planning an extraordinary

event

at a minimal cost.

Furthermore

, I have a branch of my company operating in the UK, So I can even get us some staff discounts for hosting an

event

and

also

complimentary entry tickets for any one tourist place in the locality. It would be great if I was provided with

this

opportunity expecting to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely David

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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6 paragraphs

223 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

Some people believe that every human being can create art (e.g. poetry, music, paintings). Other people think art can only be created by people born with a special ability. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

What could be the most challenging part of working on a group project? Choose one of the options below and provide specific reasons or examples. -Adjusting to different work styles -Finding a way to resolve disagreements -Staying focused on the task

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task 2: both men and women these days work full-time, so it is logical for them to share household chores equally. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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