The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts illustrate the main reasons why people chose either a

car

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or a bicycle for going to work.

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it is clear that

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a majority of residents select bicycles

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physical health and environmental issues,

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the main reason for driving to work is its convenience. 60 % of cyclists prefer a bike since it is useful for their general health, and it

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decreased air pollutants, with both reasons constituting an equal share.

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, the main reason for

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drivers is

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convenience, at 40%. The major second factor in

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group relates to far distances on the commute, accounting for 20%. The other factors have moderate importance in

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making decision. 13

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believe that bikes do not cause extra expenditure.

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, 14% state that people do not need to look for parking spots. One in ten indicates that cars are safer than bikes.

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, it is easy to move or transport things by

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, 14%. the same number of people in both groups express that their chosen mode of transportation is faster.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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