You are a university student living in on-campus accommodation. You are having some problems with the Internet connection in your room. Write to the supervisor of your residence, in your letter: ● Introduce yourself ● Inform him/her of the situation ● Request that the problem be fixed

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to report about issues I am experiencing with the Wi-Fi connection in my room and request support. My name is Daulet Tumbayev. I am a senior year student from the Computer Science department living in the second dorm and my room number is 126.

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the room right next to the elevator on the eighth floor. The problem with the internet connection began two days ago. A few times a day my network suddenly drops and a remote server refuses to assign me an IP address to connect me back. The troubleshooting tool states that the problem might be on the server side. I want to request technical support from the IT department. Could you please forward my letter to them? As a temporary solution, I would request a static IP that will provide me with a stable connection. Looking forward to hearing from you, Daulet Tumbayev

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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7 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are a university student living in on-campus accommodation. You are having some problems with the Internet connection in your room. Write to the supervisor of your residence, in your letter: ● Introduce yourself ● Inform him/her of the situation ● Request that the problem be fixed

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Nowadays in many countries more and more people are spending their time away from their families. Why is this? What are the effects on themselves and on their families?