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.There have been many inventions in human history, such as wheels. Some people think the most important thing is the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Throughout history,various things
has
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 been invented
such
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 as wheels.
Howevrer
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,some
people
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 believe that
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internet
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 play as most significant role in
the
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history.In my view,I believe
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internet
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the internet
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 is the greatest invention which
break
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 boundary of knowledge and
overcome
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comunication
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communication
restrict
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 of distance.
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 with,
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internet
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the internet
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 change the way we access information.In the past,it is
hardly
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 for us to find
studying
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 materials
such
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 as books and
audios
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.
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,nowadays,we can get as
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 materials with just
few
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 click.
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,if you want to learn how to cook
then
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 you can find the recipe
from
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internet
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.
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 being a
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 for studying,the inventions
also
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 provide up-dating news about global issues.
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,it is
sometime
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people
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 consider about
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internet
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the internet
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is
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as
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treasure
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a treasure
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 house of knowledge.If
people
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 master the skill of getting information from
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internet
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the internet
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,
it
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they
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 can get life easily.
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,
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internet
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the internet
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also
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change
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 the way we communicate.In recent years,
people
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 can communicate face to face
throught
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through
 online
meeting
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meetings
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.The inventions
helping
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help
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people
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 communicate without distance
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as
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parents can see their child
that
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who study abroad,and no need travel to there.
This
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techonology
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technology
also
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 commonly
use
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 in
business
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a business
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 meeting,it
make
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 local company closer
with
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 foreign company.
Futhermore
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Furthermore
,
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internet
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the internet
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 develop a new business model which is online shopping.It is easily and
efficiently
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 method for shopping.
Customer
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Customers
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 can save time
that
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is use
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 for
commute
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 to shopping
mall
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malls
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 with few
click
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 at home. In conclusion,
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internet
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the internet
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 is the most significant invention because it
improve
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improves
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the efficient
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efficient
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efficiency
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 to
acess
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access
 information and communicate way.I believe
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internet
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the internet
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 improve our
life
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living
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standard
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standards
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 and will develop more function
play
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and play
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as
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an
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 indispensable role
on
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in
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 our whole life in future.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • revolutionized
  • instantaneous
  • global communication
  • transform industries
  • democratized access
  • geographic and economic barriers
  • social connectivity
  • global communities
  • cultural exchange
  • telemedicine
  • foundational frameworks
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