.There have been many inventions in human history, such as wheels. Some people think the most important thing is the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Throughout history,various things
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been invented
such
as wheels.
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,some
people
believe that
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internet
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play as most significant role in
the
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history.In my view,I believe
internet
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the internet
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is the greatest invention which
break
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boundary of knowledge and
overcome
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comunication
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communication
restrict
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of distance.
To begin
with,
internet
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the internet
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change the way we access information.In the past,it is
hardly
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for us to find
studying
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materials
such
as books and
audios
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.
However
,nowadays,we can get as
much
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materials with just
few
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click.
For example
,if you want to learn how to cook
then
you can find the recipe
from
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internet
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.
Along with
being a
resources
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for studying,the inventions
also
provide up-dating news about global issues.
Therfore
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,it is
sometime
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people
consider about
internet
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the internet
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is
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as
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treasure
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a treasure
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house of knowledge.If
people
master the skill of getting information from
internet
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the internet
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,
it
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they
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can get life easily.
Additionally
,
internet
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the internet
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also
change
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the way we communicate.In recent years,
people
can communicate face to face
throught
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through
online
meeting
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.The inventions
helping
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people
communicate without distance
such
as
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parents can see their child
that
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who study abroad,and no need travel to there.
This
techonology
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technology
also
commonly
use
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in
business
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a business
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meeting,it
make
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local company closer
with
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foreign company.
Futhermore
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Furthermore
,
internet
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the internet
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develop a new business model which is online shopping.It is easily and
efficiently
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method for shopping.
Customer
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Customers
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can save time
that
is use
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for
commute
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to shopping
mall
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with few
click
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at home. In conclusion,
internet
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the internet
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is the most significant invention because it
improve
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the efficient
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efficient
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efficiency
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to
acess
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access
information and communicate way.I believe
internet
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the internet
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improve our
life
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living
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standard
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standards
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and will develop more function
play
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and play
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as
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an
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indispensable role
on
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our whole life in future.
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