The two maps below show and island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show and island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. 

    Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps show an
island
before and after the construction of tourist facilities. The
island
was originally undeveloped, with only a few palm trees and a beach. After the construction, the
island
was transformed into a tourist destination with a variety of facilities, including accommodations, a restaurant, a pier, and a swimming area. The most significant changes took place in the central part of the
island
, where a cluster of accommodations was built. The accommodations are connected by footpaths and are surrounded by palm trees. A pier was
also
built on the southern coast of the
island
, and a restaurant and reception area was built in the northwest part of the
island
. The construction of these facilities has had a significant impact on the
island
. The
island
is now much more accessible to tourists, and it offers a variety of activities and amenities that make it a desirable destination.
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