The graph shows how different types of students in Canada use the internet in general, through broadband or through wireless mediums (phones, laptops). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph shows how different types of students in Canada use the internet in general, through broadband or through wireless mediums (phones, laptops).

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The graphs
depicts
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the proportion of
students
in
canada
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using
internet
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in general ,
broadband
and wireless devices .The users are categorized
in
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various categories .
For instance
, all adults , non-
students
, undergrads , grad
students
,
community
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and community
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college .
Overall
, all adults
uses
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internet
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the internet
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,which is accounted for 75 %.
While
,
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non-
students
prefer
internet
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the internet
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as compared to
broaband
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broadband
and wireless devices. Non-
students
using
internet
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the internet
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,which is accounted for 92 % and for
broadband
user
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users
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it is about 82% .On another hand side , undergrads are at the highest proportion for using
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the internet
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internet
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,which is nearly 98 % and
broadband
preference is slightly low than
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the internet
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internet
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,which is 93 %.
Although
, the percentage of
undergrads
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students
who prefer wireless devices is 92 % .
Likewise
,Grads
students
accounted for 99 %
for
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using
internet
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the internet
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. At the same time , they
uses
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broadband
at 95 % .
Similarly
,community
collegesuses
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colleges uses
colleges use
internet
at 94 % and wireless medium at 85 % The proportion rate is low for
broadband
user
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users
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,which is
for
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78 % . community college
prefer
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internet
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,which is accounted for 94%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, internet, broadband with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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