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The plans below show a small theater in 2010, and the same theater in 2012.

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The maps represent the layout of a small theatre in 2010 and two
years
 later.
Overall
 , a mini theatre has used its side space by extending and adding rooms to it.
In addition
, they have replaced a cafe with a restaurant. In regard to
main
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 entrance, it is located
at
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in
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South
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the South
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 centre
in
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for
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 both
the
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apply
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years
 .
On
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 2010, southwest was occupied by
a
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 admin
office
 and a ticket
office
,but two
years
 later it was replaced with
the
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 restaurant by utilising extra space. The ticket
office
have
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 been moved to
southeast
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 corner and the admin
office
have
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 been relocated near
West
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 side of the stage and above the eatery place. Seating rows have been unaltered. In 2012, the stage has been modified by adding a pathway behind it and adding a corridor in it. The dressing room is adjacent to the stage’s northwest and it has an attached shower room, but 2
years
 ago it wasn’t available for
performer
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. On
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the northeast
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northeast
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 they built a storage room with an entrance on
corridor
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the corridor
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 zone.
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