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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extend do you egree or disagree with this opinion?

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Many
languages
 are lost per annum and most
people
 believe that without a lot of ,
languages
life
 will be easier.
This
 essay agrees that
languages
 are overlooked and
life
 will be better.
Firstly
 we learn the main
languages
 and
secondly
,
people
 don't struggle with communication. On the one hand, Nowadays many tongues are ignored
as a result
, the main vernaculars are staying
this
 is very good. Because
people
 suffer to learn extra
languages
 which their relatives and friends talk in
this
language
.
This
language
 is dying out. We mainly need to spend time for to learn the main
language
.
For instance
, mainly
language
 which internet
languages
 are Uzbek, English, Russian and other
languages
. Learning main
languages
 will express benefit. Invalid
languages
 needn't us. Teaching many
languages
 snags for us and studying these
languages
 waste of time.
On the other hand
, if we
people
 who speak an old
language
 were to speak we would have to learn that
language
 and it would be difficult for us. We don't spend time on other useless
languages
. We need to focus on the main
languages
 for development. If the main
languages
 stay in the world. Our
life
 will be better and society need to lose faster.
Languages
 which are getting lost are mostly spoken by fewer
people
. It is not uncommon that only a few
people
 speak a particular
language
 and that’s why it is in danger. we should put more priority on
people
’s living standards rather than focusing on the
language
 they speak. In conclusion, many
people
 to want speak a
language
 and to learn which
life
 will be better.
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