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shopping is becoming more and more popular as a leisure activitys. Howeever some people. Feel that this has both positive and negative effects. what is shopping so popular what effect does its increase in popularity have on and on society

#leisure #activitys #howeever #people #effects #effect #popularity #society
For many of the majority of the
youth
 in the present day
activity
 of shopping
have
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 become their most. popular leisure time
activity
.
This
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 essay
i
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I
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 will discuss all the
reason
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reasons
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 and whether they should be going
activity
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to activity
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instay
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instal
. There many
reason
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reasons
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 why shopping has popular
youth
people
today
.
Firstly
, majority of the
youth
people
 one of the biggest
reason
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reasons
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today
 because
fashionable
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of fashionable
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trend
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trends
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. When looking
at
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apply
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the
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apply
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around
of
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apply
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the many
country
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countries
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 most of the
youth
 can be seen in the shopping
center
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centre
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. As an example during the weekend in
srilanka
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Sri Lanka
 the one
goldplece
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goldpiece
 shopping mall is
crawd
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crowd
 of
youth
people
 who do shopping
jest
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just
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 as a
fashanable
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fashionable
today
.
Secondly
,
whay
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why
what
 shopping is so popular
today
due to
the
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apply
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advertising
.
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?
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Majoriy
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Majority
 of
producer
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producers
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 of different
kind
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kinds
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 of
servises
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services
 can be
easilly
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easily
controller
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controlled
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 as
an
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apply
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example majority of technology advertisement
people
who
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are in the
youth
people
. Shopping is a very productive
activity
 and the
youth
people
 should be continually doing that.
Firstly
,
this
 is because when
youth
people
going
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go
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 shopping they can release stress and
satisfied
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be satisfied
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 with
thelife
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the life
.Because of certain
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factors
factories
factorys
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,factorys
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 they have to face
such
 as education, family and extra
activity
 . There must
more
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be more
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 productive
activitys
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activities
activity
 better than shopping .
Firstly
, sport is a very productive
activitys .that
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activity that
 could greatly improve the
youth
people
 in life. In conclusion , shopping is very popular is
youth
people
today
 because of advertising .
However
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 I believe that shopping should be
onlly
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only
activity
 that they should
forcouse
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force
 make them better invest and it
get
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gets
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 them
indepent
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independent
.
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