Today many people do not know their neighbours. What are the reasons and solutions for this issues.

Nowadays, it is believed that
people
who live in the same
neighborhood
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rarely know each
others
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. Reasons which can cause
this
circumstance and possible solutions will be discussed in
this
essay. There are two main factors which contribute to
this
issue. First of all, modern life makes
citizen
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citizens
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so busy that they have no time to communicate with their neighbours.
For example
, most of us have to work from nine to five and after
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we have other activities
such
as playing
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a sport
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sport
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sports
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, watching
film
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films
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and even working.
In addition
,
lack
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of social events in the area can
also
be the cause.
Social
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event is considered to be a chance for
people
people
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to know each
others
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.
This
makes
people
rarely have an opportunity to talk and share about themself. To tackle
this
problem, there are
also
several solutions which can be taken into account.
Initially
, Insteading of staying at home, inviting neighbours to your house is a nice way to build
relationship
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.
This
does not only create a new circle of
friend
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in where you live, but
also
have some companies to hang out with.
Additionally
, there should be more social events in the
neighborhood
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to improve
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the relationship
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relationship
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relationships
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.
For example
,
BBQ
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party should be held
in
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at
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the weekend, so individuals can have time to know
people
and enjoy the party at the same time In conclusion, a serious these days is that citizens hardly communicate with each
others
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. If
above
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solutions are applied,
this
problem will
be end
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in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • neighbourhood bonds
  • social media connectivity
  • urban lifestyle
  • online relationships
  • fast-paced society
  • privacy concerns
  • communal relations
  • individualism
  • transient societies
  • expatriates
  • cultural shift
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