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2.You recently discovered that there are plans to build a new airport in your area and you are not happy with it. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, o Say how you found out about the plans o Explain what problems your neighbourhood will face o Suggest some possible solutions to those problems.

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Dear
Mr.
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 Patel, I am writing
this
 letter with utmost dissatisfaction with the idea of building a new airport in an active residential colony. It was advertised in the
news paper
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 edition dated
on
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31st June
,
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 2023. Being a resident of
this
 colony I do not favor
this
 plan of the government. Being a citizen of
this
 country, I do hold the right to
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. Building an airport near an active housing locality would bring in a lot of noise pollution
as well as
 air pollution.
This
 could be disturbing for
the
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elderly people
as well as
the
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young children. Air pollution
due to
 the harmful emissions let out from the aero
plane’s
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 is hazardous for any individual. I would highly appreciate
If
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 you can consider the local issues and set up an airport
little
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 away from the residential area so that it does not cause any health concerns for the residents. Thanking you,
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 faithfully. Annie
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