The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The pictures illustrate how the small town of Birshire changed after the construction of several facilities in the future. As can be seen from the maps, the town is predicted to be undergone urbanization and modernization. It is notable that the developments expect to make the buildings located in the right area. To be precise,
while
there are shops and a small number of houses in the housing area, there are forecasted to have more 7 more houses and no stores and there is estimated to have a car park which is predicted to replace Hoolahan farm.
Due to
the modernization, the supermarket and sports centre are projected to be located at the junction of
corbie
Capitalize word
Corbie
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road and that street, and on the bottom right-hand corner respectively. Compared to the present, the only thing
that is
evacuated to have no change is the public park.
Moreover
, the roundabout is expected to appear at the intersection.
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