The graph below shows the average monthly chnage in the prices of three metal during 2014.
The provided line graph compares the mean
price
alternation of three metals (copper, nickel
, and zinc) in each month of the year 2014.
Overall
, nickel
prices varied very much in 12 months whereas
zinc prices maintained almost a flat trend.
To begin
with, while
the cost of nickel
dramatically switched to 5% in March from January, it followed a steady trend till May 2014. But after
that, the price
had changed significantly in July after just over 3.5% cost rotation. Though the price
did not alter in July, August, September, and December, the rotation was three per cent from October to November. Interestingly, the charges of zinc also
share an identical curve to the nickel
.
On the other hand
, the charges of copper fluctuated very less compared to
other two metals. Though the price
did not change at all from July to September and October to November, the largest variation was a little above 1.5% from June to July.Submitted by mostafiz.rahman.cse on
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