The graph below shows the average monthly chnage in the prices of three metal during 2014.

The graph below shows the average monthly chnage in the prices of three metal during 2014.
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The provided line graph compares the mean
price
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alternation of three metals (copper,
nickel
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, and zinc) in each month of the year 2014.
Overall
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,
nickel
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prices varied very much in 12 months
whereas
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zinc prices maintained almost a flat trend.
To begin
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with,
while
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the cost of
nickel
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dramatically switched to 5% in March from January, it followed a steady trend till May 2014. But after that, the
price
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had changed significantly in July after just over 3.5% cost rotation. Though the
price
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did not alter in July, August, September, and December, the rotation was three per cent from October to November. Interestingly, the charges of zinc
also
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share an identical curve to the
nickel
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.
On the other hand
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, the charges of copper fluctuated very less compared to other two metals. Though the
price
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did not change at all from July to September and October to November, the largest variation was a little above 1.5% from June to July.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words price, nickel with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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