All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people are of the view that all fossil fuel-burning
cars
must be prohibited for only electrical-consuming automobiles.
This
essay agrees with the statement because electric
cars
prevent global warming and
air
pollution.
Firstly
, environmental issues like global warming caused by emissions of fossil fuels by
cars
will be reduced. The usage of some modes of transportation like
cars
is one of the most common causes of climate change
due to
combustion which emits exhaust fumes containing harmful residual substances like carbon monoxide. We burn about 10 per cent of fossil fuels which emit toxins that cause the earth's temperature to increase drastically.
For instance
, the earth’s surface temperature is increasing every now and
then
causing droughts in some parts of the world.
Secondly
,
such
cars
cause
air
pollution in the environment by ing out gases like nitrous oxide and carbon monoxide which make the
air
unsafe to breathe and can cause long-term effects on human health with diseases like lung cancer, heart disease, and respiratory problems so using
cars
with other sources of power like Tesla will prevent polluted atmosphere which will ensure a healthy nation.
Also
, respiratory diseases like pleural effusion and emphysema are prevalent in hospitals here in Ghana. In conclusion, I agree that electric
cars
should replace fossil fuel-burning vehicles because climate change and
air
pollution will be gradually eliminated to ensure an environmentally friendly planet.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • air pollution
  • greenhouse gases
  • climate change
  • sustainable
  • renewable
  • electric vehicles
  • battery technology
  • charging infrastructure
  • range anxiety
  • government support
  • incentives
  • subsidies
  • renewable energy
  • environmental impact
  • energy efficiency
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