Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some
people
hold the idea that everyone should get equal punishment for their crimes. While
others believe that before reaching a final verdict one should always listen to their side of the story . What were the conditions and events which compel
them to do so? I will explain both viewpoints in forthcoming paragraphs, Wrong verb form
compelled
Although
I agree with the latter ones.
A predominant reason why people
suggest equality is, In
order to improve law and order situations and easy justice , Punishment should be equal for the rich and poor . Whenever there is any review involved some Correct your spelling
that in
people
might use this
as a loophole in the system . Additionally
,this
will help them trick the system . For example
, there is a policy of pre-arrest bail which politicians use frequently . This
helps them to avoid lockup.Also
, They used this
and escape
to other countries . Wrong verb form
escaped
Finally
, in order to provide justice there should zero tolerance
policy .
Many Correct article usage
a tolerance
people
think that listening to background events and then
deciding on punishment can stop many freshers to adopt
Change preposition
from adopting
this
path. Counselling and little
assistance can stop them from being a criminal. Correct article usage
a little
For example
, recently a piece of news was published in the media that a father of 4 hungry children commits a robbery . Due to
the unavailability of daily wage work, he stole fruits and cash to buy food items for his kids .when
police heard his story nor did they only Correct your spelling
When
arrange
food for him but Wrong verb form
arranged
also
arranged a permanent job for him .This
shows a little sympathy can improve society.
To conclude
, this
can be reiterated that however
there are always pros and cons related to both views but continuous revision of justice rules can identify and remove loop-hole
from the system . Having said that Correct your spelling
loopholes
this
will definitely improvised
society as well .Verb problem
improve
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task response
Expand on the arguments for and against fixed punishments and considering individual circumstances. Your essay should provide a clear and balanced discussion of both viewpoints.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are present, but they could be more explicit. Additionally, ensure that each paragraph contributes to the overall coherence of the essay.