Your friend bought tickets to the theatre for both of you. Write a letter to him to tell him that you cannot go to the theatre. In your letter:  Apologize  Explain the situation  Tell him what he can do with the extra ticket

Dear Dhrumil, I am very excited to watch the

movie

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which is releasing

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apply

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the

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this

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upcoming Friday.

Also

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, I know that we already made

plan

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plans

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in advance that we both will go together to watch Fast and Furious as we both like racing movies.

However

Linking Words

, I am writing

this

Linking Words

letter to apologize that I cannot come with you to watch

this

Linking Words

movie

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. Actually, my elder sister is coming back

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apply

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home after five years from Australia.

Initially

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, I

tought

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thought

taught

that she is coming on the next Saturday. But when I checked her ticket to make an arrangement to pick her

from

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up from

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the

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airport at that time I got

know

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to know

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about

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apply

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that she is

also

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coming on the upcoming Friday. As she is coming after a long time I cannot miss the chance to pick her

from

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up from

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the

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airport.

Also

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, my father

also

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have

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has

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an important meeting on that day so I am the only person left in my family. So, I cannot come with you to watch the

movie

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According to

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me, you should take someone else

instead

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of me. Please do not cancel your plan to watch the

movie

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because of me. I

also

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called our one of mutual friends Rutvik and he is available on that day. So it is better to take him with you as he is

also

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interested in

these kind

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this kind

these kinds

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of movies. Hoping that you will consider my suggestion Yours truly, Parth Patel

patel.parth8668Wed Jul 05 2023

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

239 words

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Your friend bought tickets to the theatre for both of you. Write a letter to him to tell him that you cannot go to the theatre. In your letter:  Apologize  Explain the situation  Tell him what he can do with the extra ticket

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? Do you thinkthis is a positive or negative situation?

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: give contact details for when you are away, give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties.

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that schools should only teach academic subjects while others believe they also teach life skills. Discuss both views and examples