The map illustrates the between and predicted future Islip town centre.

The map illustrates the between and predicted future Islip town centre. It is obvious that more accommodations will be constructed, and the road will be expanded extensively.

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park will be small than before At present,

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town is unfilled. To be more specific, housing which occupies

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the middle and bottom of the area is near a park to the East and a school to the West.

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, most of the fraction in the North is countryside, and there is the main road between two chains of shops. In the

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the main road is expected to be renovated into a two-lane . The shops on the top of the place will be replaced by numerous accommodations, which are a principal vast shopping

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between a bus station and a car park, and new housing on the top right-hand side. A bus station and a parking area are

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planned to be built to the west and the east of the shopping centre, respectively.

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Jul 6, 2023

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The map illustrates the between and predicted future Islip town centre.

Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer.

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the sam products anywhere in the world.Do you think is a posivtive or negative development?