The map illustrates the between and predicted future Islip town centre.
The map illustrates the between and predicted future Islip town centre.
It is obvious that more accommodations will be constructed, and the road will be expanded extensively.
However
park will be small than before
At present, Add a comma
,However
this
town is unfilled. To be more specific, housing which occupies in
the middle and bottom of the area is near a park to the East and a school to the West. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, most of the fraction in the North is countryside, and there is the main road between two chains of shops.
In the future
the main road is expected to be renovated into a two-lane . The shops on the top of the place will be replaced by numerous accommodations, which are a principal vast shopping Add a comma
,future
center
between a bus station and a car park, and new housing on the top right-hand side. A bus station and a parking area are Change the spelling
centre
also
planned to be built to the west and the east of the shopping centre, respectively.Submitted by anhnguhongmai on
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