Around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so populations in the countryside are decreasing. Is this a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, the world is growing up rapidly and more comfortable than before. There are new technologies which make

people

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’s lifestyles more

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and more modern. With that growth came the emergence of new cities.

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, the appearance of new cities, which is called urbanization,

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means the

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people

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living in the countryside

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decreasing. So

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is helpful or harmful to

development

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, and what we can do to solve

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goes better

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we explore the positive side of

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problem

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can help

people

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get jobs and the

infrastructures

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in their country will be upgraded. The next factor is

people

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can have higher income

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as their country's

development

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is increasing, there will be more and more groups and companies from abroad will invest in

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development

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the development

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, the negative side of

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problem

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comes from the shortage of workers. Many

people

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move to the city to get a better life.

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rural areas are less developed than urban areas. The environmental pollution

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is the next reason that makes it negative. When there are too many

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living in the cities, the quality of life will decrease and the appearance of the slums is inevitable. To solve

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, the government should focus on investing more in rural areas, and increase their welfare. The countryside has

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potential to become an economic

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area thanks to the resources, fertile soil, the weather and so on. In conclusion,

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has both good and bad sides. We should balance

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let one be more than the other.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

265 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Urbanization
Amenities
Economic prospects
Overcrowding
Traffic congestion
Pollution
Agricultural abandonment
Cultural diversity
Innovation
Cultural heritage
Family ties
Infrastructure
Public services
Sustainable urban planning
Rural revitalization

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