Ielts Simon: Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is important to achieve economic
development
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but
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, it is
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needed to achieve other improvements equally
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as science, health, and many more. Economic
progress
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is very much helpful because if
people
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of a
nation
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will get more income that will help them to reduce poorly. As
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people
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will be out of a poor line
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it will be easy for the government. If
people
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will have money
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it will be easy for them to get
education
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, food, and many more. For ,example if the
nation
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will only
grows
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in economic ways that will not help other factors. Some communities think that other
types
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of
progress
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are equally important for a
country
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because if a
country
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will not have other
progress
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then
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there will be no use of money. Countries should
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progress
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in
education
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, health, clothes, transportation, roads, airways, import, export, waterways and many more. For ,example if the
country
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will
progress
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in all
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of ways
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not only food,
education
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and more but
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it will grow with all
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of
progress
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. Not only is economic
development
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needed but
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other
development
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is needed
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as GDP, and many more. A
nation
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should
also
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focus on
education
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and more. If a
nation
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has only
progress
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in economics
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that
progress
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will be called 50%
development
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only. So, countries should not focus on economic
progress
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but should
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work on all
types
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of growth which can make a
country
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a progressive
country
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and help their
people
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to live an easy and happy lifestyle.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic progress
  • job creation
  • infrastructure
  • standard of living
  • foreign investments
  • national prestige
  • social progress
  • advancements
  • healthcare
  • social equality
  • equitable societies
  • crime and social unrest
  • environmental progress
  • sustainable development
  • natural resources
  • environmental degradation
  • climate change
  • cultural progress
  • national identity
  • tourism
  • creativity and innovation
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