The pie charts below show the electricity generation by source in China and Spain in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The pie charts below show the electricity generation by source in China and Spain in 2005 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The chart below each illustrates the electric generation by source in
China
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and
Spain
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. We can find out that renewable
sources
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became a dominant feature for electric generation in both
China
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and
Spain
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in 2015, after the 10-year gap. First of all, the difference between 2005 and 2015 in
China
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is pretty apparent. In 2005, Coal had a great portion among all of the
sources
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, which made
China
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dependent on coal.
However
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, the trend changed in 2015. By reducing the amount of coal usage,
China
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's renewable source usage was 10% increased than before. Compared to
China
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,
Spain
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had quite an even number among the
sources
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in 2005. The impressive feature different from
China
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is that
Spain
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's oil & gas usage was 32%, which was the highest percentage in 2005. But after the 10-year gap, it totally changed. Renewable
sources
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turned out to become the main source, which is the same as
China
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.
Instead
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of consuming coal, oil & gas, it is quite definite that both two countries focused on producing renewable
sources
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for electricity generation.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words china, spain, sources with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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