The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph
show
the data for Change the verb form
shows
foreign
visitor who visit 3 Add an article
the foreign
a foreign
diffrent
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different
areas
in Europe
between year
1987 to 2007. Change the article
the year
According to
the date
given to us by the graph ,it can be seen that there are 3 main Correct your spelling
data
areas
visited by these non-european
visitors which Change the capitalization
non-European
is
the coastal Correct subject-verb agreement
are
areas
, the mountains and the lakes .
Between the year
1987 to 1997
the most visited Add a comma
,1997
areas
of europe
by oversea Change the capitalization
Europe
toursit
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tourists
was
the coastal Correct subject-verb agreement
were
areas
,the lake areas
and the mountains respectively . But in the year
1997 and 2002 , the Fix the agreement mistake
years
number
of people
visited
the lakes overtake the most Correct pronoun usage
who visited
visted
place in Correct your spelling
visited
europe
from the Change the capitalization
Europe
costal
area .The Correct your spelling
coastal
number
of people
visited
the lakes area Wrong verb form
visiting
peak
at Replace the word
peaked
estimately
around 75 Correct your spelling
estimated
estimate
thousans
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thousand
thousands
people
in year
2002 ,before delined down to around 50 Correct article usage
the year
thousans
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thousand
thousands
people
in year
2007.
Meanwhile ,the Correct article usage
the year
vistor
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visitor
number
of
the Change preposition
in
montain
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mountain
areas
of europe
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Europe
was
stagnant only Unnecessary verb
apply
inreased
by Correct your spelling
increased
aroud
10 Correct your spelling
around
thousans
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thousand
thousands
people
between 1987 and 2007 . In contrast
, the number
of traveler
who visited the Change to a plural noun
travelers
costal
area Correct your spelling
coastal
between
the same period increased by around 30 Change preposition
in
thousans
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thousand
thousands
people
and 40 thousans
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thousand
thousands
people
for the lake areas
visitor Change noun form
area's
number
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Vocabulary: Replace the words areas, europe, year, number, people, thousans with synonyms.
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