The graphs below compare the average weekly earnings of male and female graduates and non-graduates. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below compare the average weekly earnings of male and female graduates

and non-graduates. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
The following bar chart demonstrates the dissimilar in average weekly earnings of the two genders who are graduated and ungraduated in certain
age
groups. It can be easily observed that men earn more than
women
in all stages of life except for the teenage years. Men's payments in a week dramatically rose as they aged for both educational statuses
while
the
income
disparity between
women
of distinguished
age
groups is much less pronounced. Regarding the first two
age
brackets, whose
income
levels come
last
in the chart, sharing an equal earning of over 200
pounds
in a week regardless of gender for only non-graduates.
In contrast
, more considerable
income
gaps are witnessed in those aged 20-24, where men earn a minimum of around 350
pounds
and a minimum of 330
pounds
per week.
Women
, meanwhile, have an average weekly
income
of roughly 330
pounds
and 290
pounds
, respectively for academic and non-academic. In terms of the four remaining
age
groups, the highest-paid males with educational degrees are 40-49 and 50-59 year-olds, earning over 700
pounds
each, greatly above the salaries of those aged 25-29 and 30-39 years old, at around 480 and 620
pounds
.
On the contrary
, the median
income
for
women
with graduation certificates in the four oldest categories is 400
pounds
. Female non-graduate
income
differences are substantially less noticeable, at about 300
pounds
.
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