The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.

The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below

gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from. Write a report for a university

lecturer describing the information given.
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The graph and table provide information about the number of yearly visits to Australia by overseas residents and the visitor's origin.
Overall
, year by year Australia's visitor
count
has been increasing.
In contrast
, Japan has the highest rate of travellers to visit. In 1975, the total number of visitors to Australia was 9
million
, where the Japanese people hold the maximum
count
of travellers followed by South Korea , with a rate of approximately 3.2 and 2.9
million
.
While
in Europe , the range was 1.1
million
and in the rest of the countries like Britain, the USA and China was below 0.9 . Moving to 1985, the visitor
count
has been increased to 50% and by 1995 the
count
reached 24
million
. By the end of 2005, the traveller range has been increased to 31million. In
this
period
also
in Japan , South Korea and
Europe
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,Europe
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people have travelled a lot compared to other countries, with the range of 12.0,9.1 and 4.5
million
.But
this
year, the Britain and the USA
count
have improved by 2% and 1%.
Whereas
, China has a slight growth with 0.8
million
.
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