The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

The table represents the numbers of humans from Africa, America, Asia and the Pacific, Europe, and the Middle East who visited other countries in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005.

Overall

, it can be seen that the total sum of people who went on international travel significantly increased during these years,

besides

the European citizens had a huge proportion of the total quantity of travellers, the least number of people were from the Middle East. All areas except America demonstrated the same sharp growth trend when traveller numbers rose from 280.2, 60.2, 18.2 and 9.8 in 1990 to 400.2, 135.8, 28.7, and 15.8 in 2005 in Europe, Asia and the Pacific, Africa, and Middle East respectively.

While

in Europe the figure for individuals who went abroad increased dramatically in 1995 to 390.3

million

starting from 280.2

million

in 1990, and

then

grew gradually, in other areas the same quantity went up moderately during the whole period. America showed a growth from 80.5

million

in 1990 to 118.2

million

in 2000,

however

, in 2005

this

area had nearly the same number as in 1995, 113.2

million

and 112.5 respectively.

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