This diagram below shows the manufacturring process for making suger from suger cane.
This
graph depicts the producing process of creating sugar
from sugar
cane plants. It is clear that
this
process involves around seven steps.
First of all , the growing of sugar
plants may take between 12 to 18 months max. Secondly
, the harvesting step
may be conducted by hand or even by machine. After the harvesting prosses is done , the sugar
canes need to be installed in a huge crushing device in order to produce juice
. Then
, this
liquid juice
will be pufyered
through what is known as a limestone filter. The next Correct your spelling
suffered
step
,
is heating the drained Remove the comma
apply
juice
in order to convert it to a syrup
. This
step
required heat to evaporate the water from the juice
. Next,
the syrup
will run into a centrifuge. Which involves separating sugar
crystals from syrup
. Add an article
the syrup
Finally
, the clear syrup
go
into a huge container meant to provide drying and cooling for Change the verb form
goes
this
syrup
to bring out the final product (clear sweet sugar
).
To sum up
, we can see that the sugar
production stages include seven steps. The second step
can be done manually or by especial
tools Correct your spelling
special
such
as trucks meant to preform
the harvesting.Correct your spelling
perform
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