Some people think controls should be made for the media such as newspaper to publish other people’s private lives, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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eagerness
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disagreness
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disagrees
disagree
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people
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intrest
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interest
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media
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give
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attention
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the attention
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the public
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the channel
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are
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media
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the media
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popularity
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the popularity
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lead
profit
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profits
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another
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anchors
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can't
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controlled
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- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
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- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
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