The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured
The chart illustrates the
process
of producing instant noodles in a certain factory.
Overall
, it is clear that
there are 8 main steps in this
linear process
beginning with storing flour in silos and ending with labelling and sealing.
As can be seen in the chart, the process
begins when the storage silos are filled with flour and then
put the flour into a mixing machine, where it is mixed with water and cooking oil. The mixture is then
rolled into sheets of dough before being cut into strips of dough.
Looking at the picture for more details, the process
continues with dough strips being moulded into disc-shaped noodles before being cooked in oil and left to dry. Following that, these discs are packed with vegetables and spices to add flavour. The process
finishes with the products being labelled and sealed so that these noodles can be delivered to shops and supermarkets to be consumed.Submitted by chautran13012006 on
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