The bar chart gives information about the comparison of visitors going to distinct museums in London from June to October.

The bar chart gives information about the comparison of visitors going to distinct museums in London from June to October.
The chart illustrates the proportion of people visiting 4 different museums in London over the period of 5 months starting from June.
Overall
,
it is clear that
British
museum
is the most attractive destinations
while
the opposite is true for National ones.
Moreover
, the number of
British
museum
visitors
is the biggest among the others in most months. From June to August, the figures for History and
British
Museum
both witness a dramatic rise of approximately 200,000 and 300,000
visitors
respectively.
Additionally
, the number of people visiting the National
Museum
witness a slight fall in July before experiencing a considerable increase to around 300,000.
Furthermore
, figures for the Science
museum
witness almost no change, holding steady at 400,000
visitors
. Looking at the bar for more details, the number of
visitors
to History,
British
, and National museums experience a downward trend,
while
that of Science witnessed some fluctuations
at the end
of the period. To be precise, the figures for History and
British
museums both peak at about 600,000 and 700,000
visitors
in June respectively, but later decrease significantly by 300,000 and 200,000 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words british, museum, visitors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bar chart
  • Visitations
  • Trends
  • Peak season
  • Popularity
  • Patterns
  • Outliers
  • Surge
  • Temporary exhibitions
  • Demographics
  • Attract
  • Museum tour
  • Cultural attraction
  • Historical exhibits
  • Tourist influx
  • Visitor statistics
  • Monthly comparison
  • Seasonal variation
  • Cultural significance
  • Footfall
  • Exhibit appeal
  • Museum's profile
  • Visitor engagement
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