Traffic on roads has become a problem in nearly every country in the world .what can be done to reduce the amount of traffic at a society level and at an individual level?

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Nowadays in Every city, and every country, transit is increasing day by day. Most of the families own three to four cars. Going forward the situation is becoming worse henceforth we need to overcome the problem with a proper solution. I would like to discuss
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issue in detail in terms of societal levels
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human beings. There are several solutions to decrease the movement levels on roads.
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the fuel prices have to be increased
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the common public will start to use government-provided public transportation. Another way where we can control travel is by increasing the cost of parking lots. so that the common population cannot use their individual vehicles which will directly lead to a reduction in traffic.
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,
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is a polluted city in India compared to other cities
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more movement on the roads, people who are residing in
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are facing many health problems
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Carbon dioxide emissions. carbon dioxide will increase in the atmosphere it will leading to harmful diseases( Lung problems). Most of the time when
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I see the news of certain incidents in
Delhi
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it makes me very concerned about the nation residing in
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be nice if the Government of India
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implement strict laws on pollution control .
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by increasing the fuel cost
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the common community are discouraged from using their own vehicles. And provide free public transportation in order to reduce transit.
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, most Indians are not disciplined or trained to follow the freight
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. Each Individual in India must take some responsibility to follow transport
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and guide others when folk make mistakes or disobey the
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. People who are travelling to offices in their cars can share the ride with their colleagues or carpool with others who are travelling in the same direction.
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following the
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at service signals will make the job easy for influx police to manage the influx flow .
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, in the United States Of America, entities follow shipment
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strictly
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, families usually are not stuck in traffic and reach their destination on time. In conclusion, Society should organize some programmes about the problems of influx and simultaneously man
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should follow the government
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. so that they can overcome the freight on the roads.
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