some people think typical teaching of a teacher and students in the cross will not exist by the year 2050. Do you agree or disagree?
Over the past
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decades
technology
has been developed and also
education
systems are developed. However
some assume Add a comma
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not
available. I do agree with that statement.
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apply
day
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. Students can complete their Change the noun form
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study
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as well as
they can complete their study
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reason
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from
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every one
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Replace the word
everyone
Secondly
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the problem
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needs
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besides
education
. This
reason all time parents pay extra money for their Change preposition
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children
. In another word
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other words
day
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for
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children's
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as well as
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for their children
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apply
study
easily from anywhere.
Fix the agreement mistake
studies
To sum up
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student
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students
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technology-driven
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apply
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their
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