The charts show where people get their news and how much they trust these sources.

The given Bar graph chart illustrates the proportion where individuals who get their

news

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most of the time in some selected nations in January and February 2021. At a fleeting glance, The nation of Finland was the maximum average

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apply

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news

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while

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Brazil and

Nigeria

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Nigeria's

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percentage same at 54% Following the nation of Germany average was almost the same is 53%.

Although

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Spain and the united kingdom agreed

equalle

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equal

36% in the 2021 research report. Moving

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, Canada's trust in

news

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is 45% and other two nations of japan and Turkey average is 41-42 %.

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, The nation of India

is agree

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agrees

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with 38%

according to

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the 2021 YouGov report Following France agreed to 30% . The lowest percentage in the United States

the

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average of 29% in 2021.

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, In the bar chart maximum average of

news

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in Finland of 65% in 2021 and 2000 respondents in each market

according to

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the Source of Reuters

institute

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digital

news

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report.

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