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There have been major advances in technology over recent decades and this has led to significant improvements in people’s lives.

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 is the modern era, everything depends on
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 and It will upgrade day by day in the present Era. So, There have been major advances in
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 over recent decades and
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 has led to significant improvements in individual's lives. I agree with
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 statement and
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 essay will discuss the benefits and side effects of
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. Let's begin with, through ,
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 people can do many works easily and without any waste of
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.
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, It can do everything without any hard work and good finishing.
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, in ancient
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 human liked handmade things
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 as clothes, jackets, bags, crockery
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 wooden beds and chairs.
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,They spend much
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 on that's types of things and did handwork. But now everything is made by machines.
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, Many companies make different types of
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 in bulk with machines
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 sell on websites and distribute them
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 earn very well. On the other hand, Recent decades have been major advances in
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 and there are many advantages.
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 There are many drawbacks for the poor masses because they make handmade
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 and sell them in the market but people give more importance to readymade
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, The reason is These
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 are available in the market at a very cheap rate rather than handmade
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 so costly and too simple than readymade
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.
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, individuals read newspapers and magazines but now people saw every news and more important information on the Internet.
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, In the
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 decades in the summer season humans spend their whole
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 in nature but now they all
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 like air conditioning areas. In conclusion, It is right
technology
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 gives many benefits to human beings and there are many disadvantages to
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 but there are huge benefits so
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 thing is to overcome its drawbacks.
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