There have been major advances in technology over recent decades and this has led to significant improvements in people’s lives.

This
is the modern era, everything depends on
technology
and It will upgrade day by day in the present Era. So, There have been major advances in
technology
over recent decades and
this
has led to significant improvements in individual's lives. I agree with
this
statement and
This
essay will discuss the benefits and side effects of
technology
. Let's begin with, through ,
technology
people can do many works easily and without any waste of
time
.
Moreover
, It can do everything without any hard work and good finishing.
For example
, in ancient
time
human liked handmade things
such
as clothes, jackets, bags, crockery
as well as
wooden beds and chairs.
Thus
,They spend much
time
on that's types of things and did handwork. But now everything is made by machines.
Although
, Many companies make different types of
products
in bulk with machines
as well as
sell on websites and distribute them
on
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shops
as
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earn very well. On the other hand, Recent decades have been major advances in
technology
and there are many advantages.
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,
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There are many drawbacks for the poor masses because they make handmade
products
and sell them in the market but people give more importance to readymade
products
, The reason is These
products
are available in the market at a very cheap rate rather than handmade
products
so costly and too simple than readymade
products
.
For example
, individuals read newspapers and magazines but now people saw every news and more important information on the Internet.
For instance
, In the
last
decades in the summer season humans spend their whole
time
in nature but now they all
time
like air conditioning areas. In conclusion, It is right
technology
gives many benefits to human beings and there are many disadvantages to
technology
but there are huge benefits so
This
thing is to overcome its drawbacks.
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