5. You are leaving your job and would like to invite your friend to replace you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: -describe the job -explain the reason you are leaving -tell him/her why you would recommend the job to them

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Dear Maninder, I hope

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letter finds you in the best of spirits and radiant health. I am writing

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letter to let you know that I am resigning from my current job and I would like you to replace me. I have been working in Dell International, as a software developer. Primarily, my job is to develop new

softwares

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and check them, in order to, find any technical

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before sending them for

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trials. I have been working

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post for the

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five years. I like my job a lot but currently, I am going through a rough phase in

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life. Actually, my mother suffered a Heart Attack two months ago, and she is still in her recovery phase. Being the only child of my parents there is no one to take care of her

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me.

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, because of her illness, I am unable to concentrate on my work.

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, I have decided to leave my office and look after her. You

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known

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long period of time now, and I know how good and sincere you are in your professional life.

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, you always wanted to work in

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MNC like

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, keeping all these things in

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apply

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mind, I think you are an ideal candidate for

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post. I urge you to kindly think about

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offer and get back to me. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours lovingly, Jatinder.

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task achievement

Consider briefly elaborating more on the benefits or challenges of the job to give a fuller picture to your friend.

coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph maintains a single focus or idea, which you did well here. Continue practicing this skill for clarity.

task achievement

The letter covers all the required points, including a job description, reason for leaving, and recommendation to a friend effectively.

coherence cohesion

Well-organized thoughts with each paragraph containing a single idea which contributes to readability.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are polite and appropriate for a letter to a friend.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

245 words

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