You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.

Dear Sir/Madam, I hope my email finds you well.I'

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writing

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email regarding

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with my roommates and I want to change my accommodation. I'

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sharing my

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with another person but

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want to change my

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because

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found difficulties with staying with him.

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, He has a huge friend circle that always

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and they are doing a party all the time they played loud music which is disturbing for me.

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,He always borrow my things without my permission

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; I didn't mind but he have to ask.

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,because of

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my studies and my personal life both will

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.I

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will not get

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enough sleep

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having some

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health

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my studies I'

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not able to concentrate on my studies because

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thing will always happen.I want to change my accommodation.please provide me

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single

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if it's available. Looking forward to your response. sincerely, Joe