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The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015.

The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015.
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The shown diagram indicates the amounts of trash collected by a recycling centre between 2011 to 2015.
Overall
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, the number of
glass
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 was the lowest in four different categories over the period given.
Additionally
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, the trends of
glass
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, tins, and
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garden
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gardens
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 oscillate throughout the period presented, except the trend of
paper
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 rose. In 2011, the figure for
paper
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 recycled stood at 57
tons
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, which was the highest. From 2011 to 2012, the figures for four different types decreased.
In particular
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, the figure for
Garden
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 recycled in 2012 was half of that for
Garden
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 recycled in 2011, with 15
tons
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.
In addition
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, the figure for
glass
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 recycled was more than that for
paper
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 recycled in 2013, with 8
tons
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. The period between 2013 and 2014 witnessed fluctuations in four different types. In 2014 and 2015, the figures for
paper
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,
glass
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, tins, and
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garden
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gardens
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 grew before reaching a peak, with 70, 52, 39, and 35
tons
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 in 2015.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words glass, garden, paper, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling centre
  • waste management
  • total waste collected
  • trends
  • categories
  • significant increases/decreases
  • analysis
  • public awareness
  • recycling policies
  • implications
  • future strategies
  • sustainable practices
  • waste reduction
  • data interpretation
  • environmental impact
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