In contemporary society, everyone should have equal opportunities in education. Therefore, universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

No doubt , nowadays both

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together in every sector ,

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, often people

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that the same number of

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are available for boys and

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in the universities as it helps to remove

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discrimination from

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point that if education is equal for everyone ,

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girls

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can

also

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study

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and make their future bright .Needless to ,say education is

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essential for

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generation to maintain equality and help to

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the

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gender

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discrimination

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society

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, in

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female

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cannot go outside for any

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whereas

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due to

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education system women

are

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also

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do

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and stand on their own feet without any problems in current time .

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, make their different identity which has not come from their

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husbands

and father

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is

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all happened

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because universities

provided

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equal

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count of

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positions

in every

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course

to both gender . Probing

further

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,

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same

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to

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is not a bad idea to change the

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to

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things of the people as females are the main part of the

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and boys

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and job together

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they can easily talk and communicate with anyone without any fear . As they both know the

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to

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each other ,

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words

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it

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to make

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life easy and smooth .

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, they can

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together without any fear and enjoy as well.

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instance, it is

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scientific

proof that

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and boy can easily share their

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opinion

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, their

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secrets

and live

long

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time together ,in

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i

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can say

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are the best friend . In conclusion ,

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this

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statment

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statement

have ample negative effect ,

nonetheless

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,

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belive

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that

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while studied

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together is

best

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way

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to change the

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of

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things and

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the

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discrimation formt

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society

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