Write about the following topic: Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
Hobbies
have multiple functions in our lifes
, like Correct your spelling
lives
stress
relief, but work and family life lead
to a decrease Change the verb form
leads
of
Change preposition
in
time
people can commit to Hobbies
. This
is one reason why stress related
health issues Add a hyphen
stress-related
is
on the rise.
In the Correct subject-verb agreement
are
last
years time
Correct article usage
the time
spend
at work has significantly risen, which leads people to be more tired in the evening. After finishing daily tasks and spending Wrong verb form
spent
time
with family or a significant other, a lot of people do not have the energy to devote some time
to a Hobby. Often, the end of the day is spent in front of the TV or streaming services. This
time
could be used for stress
relief by either excercise
or reading, but in my personal Correct your spelling
exercise
experience
it is easier to sit Add a comma
,experience
passiv
in front of a monitor.
Correct your spelling
passive
passively
This
has serious health implications, as hobbies
can have stress reducing
effects. Add a hyphen
stress-reducing
Stress related
diseases, like heart problems, are one of the leading causes of death in our society. Add a hyphen
Stress-related
Hobbies
could help to mitigate the effects of stress
on our hearts significantly, in addition
to stress
in our daily lifes
.
Correct your spelling
lives
Hobbies
therefore
serve an important purpose, not only in our personal lifes
but Correct your spelling
lives
also
in our society.Submitted by katharina.wilfinger on
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