the line graph shows the amount of fastfood consumed by astrutalian teeagaer from 1975 to 2000

the line graph shows the amount of fastfood consumed by astrutalian teeagaer from 1975 to 2000
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the line graph compares the consumption of three fast-food pizzas, hamburgers and
fish
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and
chips
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by teenagers in Australia over a. period of 25 years.
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, it can be seen that eating
fish
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and
chips
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decreased significantly,
while
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the other two fast foods were eaten at a higher amount. In 1975, the most popular fast food was
fish
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and
chips
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, being eaten more than 100 times a year.
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number was far higher than those for the other two fast foods, which were eaten just 5 times a year.
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, apart from a small rise in 1980, it decreased gradually to finish at just a lower 40. In sharp contrast, Australian teenagers ate more pizza and hamburgers. consumption of pizza went up moderately until it overtook
fish
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and
chips
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in 1995, at 60, and it
then
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levelled off at above 80 for the
last
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five years. The sharp rise was seen in hamburgers as the occasions they were eaten sure to more than 80 in 1995, exceeding
fish
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and
chips
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in 1997.
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rise was followed by a gradual growth, finishing at 100. the same level that
fish
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and
chips
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started. ended the time frame at
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, chips with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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