the line graph shows the amount of fastfood consumed by astrutalian teeagaer from 1975 to 2000
the line graph compares the consumption of three fast-food pizzas, hamburgers and
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
by teenagers in Australia over a. period of 25 years. Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be seen that eating Linking Words
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
decreased significantly, Use synonyms
while
the other two fast foods were eaten at a higher amount.
In 1975, the most popular fast food was Linking Words
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
, being eaten more than 100 times a year. Use synonyms
this
number was far higher than those for the other two fast foods, which were eaten just 5 times a year. Linking Words
However
, apart from a small rise in 1980, it decreased gradually to finish at just a lower 40.
In sharp contrast, Australian teenagers ate more pizza and hamburgers. consumption of pizza went up moderately until it overtook Linking Words
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
in 1995, at 60, and it Use synonyms
then
levelled off at above 80 for the Linking Words
last
five years. The sharp rise was seen in hamburgers as the occasions they were eaten sure to more than 80 in 1995, exceeding Linking Words
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
in 1997. Use synonyms
this
rise was followed by a gradual growth, finishing at 100. the same level that Linking Words
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
started.
ended the time frame atUse synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, chips with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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