Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many people think that

music

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a vital role in combining people of different customs and ages from all over the world together. Most

of

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the

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music

specialists consider that

music

is a universal language which has for exchange the intends with each

others

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. I personally agree with

this

viviewpoint

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viewpoint

.

This

essay will discuss the possible reasons related to

this

viewpoint. The foremost reason is that

according to

folk

music

is an efficient way of bringing individuals who have

in

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different backgrounds.

In addition

,

music

is not the language of a particular country.

Consequently

, individuals from

whole

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world are able to comprehend the meaning of

same

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song through its melody.

For instance

, K- POP

songs

are extremely popular and promulgated

to

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many nations.

Furthermore

,

music

can mitigate the gap between people in

older

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the older

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generation and

younger

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the younger

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generation. It would be clearly seen from

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of TV shows

invited

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for

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former singers to join

with

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the show in

oder

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order

to sing with adolescents.

On the other hand

,

music

is responsible for the community from different countries and cultures.

In other words

, there are numerous

music

schools where students from many regions go to study

such

as The Bharathi College of

music

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in

the

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india

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and The London

college

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of

music

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in the United Kingdom.

This

means that

music

can bring a lot of individuals into one place.

Besides

, some

music

is eternal because some

songs

never eliminate from

heart

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of the

persons

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.

For example

, there are no age restrictions for listening

songs

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to songs

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of

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Michael Jackson.

However

, without considering differences all are amused

from

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hearing

that

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that song

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songs

. In conclusion,

according to

aforementioned

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arguments

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I have reached the conclusion that

music

is a good tool for communication. In my opinion, it has a force to

connected

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the different nations and generations. I recommend that all of them should

close

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to the

music

for

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to

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break the boundaries which have among the countries and

community

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communities

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.